2/05/05
In this experiment I started to see an alternative way to piece this piece
together. By using visual relationships of the VC I couyld make transitions
between scenes and allow the girls to flow or jump into different worlds
in a seemingly illogical way, but smoothly from the VC montage. Logic in
the illogical. Reality in the virtual.
Narrative emerginging from non -narrative. It becomes clearer that the title
is apt. 'Rhizomes' is about networks and connections, which are beyond the
linear & logical, but somehow patterns exist .
Maybe an ending is becoming.
SCENES COMMANDS EXTRA COMMANDS
J R S
S 8Shapes..............................................................stays
whole X 2
S 8Shapes..............................................................allow
others to travel through this
S 8Shapes..............................................................VC
interlude.......................................................select any
for begin / end
S Trees...................................................................reposition
R S Entangled Interquirk............................................intercut
2
R S Entangled Interquirk............................................all
sequences can hang off this as middle........include repetition
S 8Shapes..............................................................mix
2 together
J TRansition Phrase..............................................can choose
this as end or start
J TRansition Phrase..............................................1 action...............................................................add
any scene anywhere
J R S Trio Pendulum Swing.........................................30 sec
R Schizo Phrase.....................................................intercut
with end one
J R Escher Duet 2.......................................................cut
up
J R S Trio Pendulum Swing.........................................10 sec..................................................................take
out any 3
J R Escher Duet 2........................................................broken
in 3
R GSVI......................................................................slow
motion anywhere within
J R Escher Duet 1........................................................2
actions anywhere.............................................repeat last
2-3 scenes but shorter
J R S Trio Pendulum Swing.........................................30-40sec...............................................................take
1 person off stage
S GSVI....................................................................swap
last 3 around..............................................exchange with
4th one if want
J R S Trio Kneel Slap Roll...........................................reposition
any 1 group........................................repeat any group
J R S Trio Kneel Slap Roll...........................................mix
with any previous 1
S 8Shapes..............................................................reposition.............................................................or
clone last 3
J R Duet of Solos......................................................repeat
last 2-3 scenes anywhere but with difference
J R S Trio Pendulum Swing........................................enter /
exit possible several times in scene
R Schizo Phrase.....................................................broken
in 2
R Schizo Phrase.....................................................exchange
this for any other
R S Entangled Interquirk............................................stay
whole place anywhere................................clone any 3-4
J R Escher Duet 1........................................................stay
whole
J R S Trio Pendulum Swing........................................mix 2 together
S BCR......................................................................mix
this with any other
J Avatara...............................................................do
back to front
BCR interlude.....................................................intercut
3
What occurred:
1. Starting with 8 Shapes quite powerful
2. INto Entangled Interquirk
3.S continues in 8 Shapes
4. J in Transition Phrase allowing S to join her with 8Shapes when J in
SW section of Transition
5. J continues TRansition and in BCR S joins her again in BCR mvt
6. S falls out window of BCR
7. J cnts in Transition to SW does Solo and Esher cube flies in
8. J does walk and fall of Esher 2
9. Return to Entangled Interquirk with R & S
10. with Escher 1 now mixed into Entangled Interquirk so have both duets
cnting at same time
11. but S bounces out to 8 Shapes several times
12. Escher 1 ends into Trees
13. S does TRees
14. New section starts kneel slaps into Esher 2 into Trio PS
15. S in BCR within TRio PS
16. J in Avatara within Trio PS
17. R in GSVI within Trio PS
18. so get intercut with all 3 reaching wall space holds in different environments
19. end with Transition Phrase